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cruiscin_lan ([personal profile] cruiscin_lan) wrote2008-12-19 12:29 pm

FIC: Gabriel Gray's Rules of Parenting

Title: Gabriel Gray's Rules of Parenting
Characters: Gabriel/Elle, Noah Gray
Rating: E for Everyone
Word Count: 521
Disclaimer: I don't own any aspect of Heroes or its characters
Spoilers/Warnings: based on the alternate future timeline of episode 3.04.
Summary: Gabriel Gray was learning the rules of parenting as he went along.

The rules of parenting weren't exactly the sort of thing that one could pick up easily, not even when blessed with intuitive aptitude.

Gabriel Gray was learning them as he went along. When his son Noah was an infant, Gabriel soon understood that he couldn't leave the house with at least one spare outfit for him, one spare diaper, one spare bottle. When Noah started crawling, Gabriel learned to keep wires out of reach, to use plastic covers on all the outlets. Then, when he began to stand and walk on his own, Gabriel started clearing all the breakables from the coffee table and making sure there were baby gates blocking the stairs to the basement. He always made sure to watch Noah when he played with Mr. Muggles, too - not that he didn't trust the dog (he had such a pleasant disposition, he'd never bite) but he was afraid Noah might play too rough.

Some rules could be expressed in short, pithy phrases. Keep cabinets closed and locked. Always test the temperature of the bath. Socks, then shoes.

Some were meant more for Noah than for Gabriel. Walk, don't run. Eat all your vegetables. Don't stick things in your nose.

Gabriel Gray liked rules. He always was the kind of kid who colored within the lines, anyway, because everything was neater that way. With rules, things were more simple - easier to keep in control. But there was one rule in particular that even Gabriel had trouble following. It broke his heart every time he needed to enforce it, but to break it could mean destruction, disaster, or worse.

Whenever she was able, he'd arrange for them all to meet in a public place, usually the park or the zoo or the beach, and they'd spend a whole day together like the normal family they could have been. Seeing her made his heart leap with excitement and anxiety, like a teenager on a blind date. He always thought he'd know what to expect, and then the smallest details would disarm him; a new haircut or a different style of dress could throw him off-guard, and instead of simply enjoying their time together he'd be wary the whole time that she'd find a way to insinuate herself back into their lives permanently.

Noah was always overjoyed to see her. Once he brought for her a collection of drawings he'd made in crayon on construction paper; another time he gave her a box full of all his "specialest" items - a shoelace, a pine cone, a few pieces of sea-glass he'd gathered. She always fussed and fawned over her son, smothering him with hugs and kisses, and Gabriel felt guilty that he was depriving his son of the full-time attention of a mother who loved him.

Not that she could offer that, anyway. She hadn't ever managed to change her ways. She had been trained all her life to be nothing more than a weapon, and as such she was always cocked and loaded. And she had a very sensitive trigger.

It was Gabriel Gray's first rule of parenting: Don't keep a gun in the house.

[identity profile] ashesfor-trees.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 05:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooooooh I like this--especially the end. Elle really is a gun :p
I also liked the "socks, then shoes" line--it made me laugh!

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 06:47 pm (UTC)(link)
I cannot even tell you how many times I put on socks before shoes. I imagine I'd be even more confused dressing a small child. :)

[identity profile] stefichan.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 05:44 pm (UTC)(link)
This was cute. I can definitely see Elle's behavior being a deal breaker for the entire family.

Cute, funny, and sad all at once.

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 06:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Cute, funny, and sad all at once.

That's what I was going for. Thanks for reading :)

[identity profile] dragynflies.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 05:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Omg you just broke my little heart. So good and unfortunatly so true. More comments with better grammar when I'm not on my crackberry at a red light. Whoops. Lol

[identity profile] dragynflies.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 07:47 pm (UTC)(link)
FIC AND DRIVE AT RED LIGHTS THAT LAST FIVE UNGODLY MINUTES.


The last sentence just kills me. Seriously. Just...die.

Now I've read this like four times and I can't get over it. I love it.

[identity profile] jncar.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 06:15 pm (UTC)(link)
What a fun little fic!

I can totally see Gabriel putting a lot of focus on "rules" more for his own sake than for Noah's. Gabriel is the kind of man who needs a lot of discipline in his life. Which is why your depiction of his relationship with Elle is both so sad and so true.

I love your last line. :)

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 06:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for commenting. You're one of my favorite authors, so it means a lot that you stopped by.... :)

(I have all of "Sometimes Two Wrongs Make a Right" saved on my hard drive, I have to read the whole thing before I'm ready to comment...)

[identity profile] jncar.livejournal.com 2008-12-20 04:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you for the compliment! I'm glad you're enjoying my story so much. :)

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2008-12-20 09:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I needed to go back and read the whole thing at once because I somehow started reading it out of order, and I can't think straight when I do things that way.

Although I went to print it out, and it's like 100 pages long! You have some serious skillz.

[identity profile] candlewaxdreams.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 06:31 pm (UTC)(link)
My heart just broke. I got all choked up when it talked about Noah giving Elle his box of treaures and then that ending. It hurts! At least Elle is alive and they get to be a family sometimes. I wonder what Gabriel has said to Noah about why Mommy doesn't live with them?

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 06:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't know what Gabriel tells Noah, but now my heart is breaking thinking about it.

[identity profile] dragynflies.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 07:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Figure it out and write it. Now please.

[identity profile] catyuy.livejournal.com 2008-12-20 09:45 pm (UTC)(link)
I second this motion.

[identity profile] mrstater.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 06:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow, this little ficcy packs quite a punch! I'm so impressed at how you've captured the lighter-hearted aspects of Gabriel being a dad (the idea of him being the primary caregiver is so fascinating) and all his carefulness and perfectionism, and then contrasted that with the very painful situation they have because Elle's such a livewire and totally unpredictable. The gun analogy is perfect for her, because she really is a loaded one.

Awesome ficlet!

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 07:01 pm (UTC)(link)
I always felt that Gabriel was a stay-at-home dad, since he was the one at home when Peter stopped by during the day and there was no mom to be seen.

I don't think I was the first one to come up with the gun analogy; I'm pretty sure [livejournal.com profile] wily_one24 beat me to it with this fic.

Thanks for reading :)

[identity profile] mrstater.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 07:03 pm (UTC)(link)
I always felt that Gabriel was a stay-at-home dad, since he was the one at home when Peter stopped by during the day and there was no mom to be seen.

Why not, since he can turn things to gold and has no need to work?
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[identity profile] faded-facade.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 06:41 pm (UTC)(link)
This fic was sad but also good at the same time. Rather than depicting Gabriel as the missing parent, this one has Elle being the one that doesn't know how to change.

And I can totally see Gabriel being a stickler for rules and needing discipline so he doesn't go back to being Sylar around little Noah.

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 07:02 pm (UTC)(link)
I thought it was about time to reverse the parenting trope. And Gabriel did seem really in control when around Noah, so I was trying to explain that as well.

[identity profile] unreckless.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 06:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, that last line made me shiver a little. I adore the last two paragraphs.

Lovely, punchy little fic! Great job!

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 07:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks :) When are you going to write more fic? You're amazing and should be writing more!

[identity profile] unreckless.livejournal.com 2008-12-20 01:56 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! My Syelle secret santa and my NaNo editing are kicking my ass right now. But I think people are really going to like the former.

*friends*

[identity profile] catyuy.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 07:39 pm (UTC)(link)
This fic was painfully good.

Late gratitude is late.

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2009-09-29 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for reading! Sorry it hurt ;)

[identity profile] mx5-pixie.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 07:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Loved the fic... Heartfelt and heartbroken all at the same time...

late gratitude is late.

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2009-09-29 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for reading :)

[identity profile] jess-ucv.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 08:12 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved this, it's certainly new and different from what I've read, you should continue with this note!

Late gratitude is late.

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2009-09-29 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for reading, I'll think about your suggestions :P

[identity profile] ateenwriter.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 10:19 pm (UTC)(link)
That was a different take. I liked it. You'd think that Gebriel would be the guy with a sensitive trigger but you made Elle that. Interesting :)

Late gratitude is late.

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2009-09-29 03:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for reading :P

[identity profile] superkappa.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 11:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I liked this, it really fit into the "I Become Death" storyline well. Why wasn't the mother around? Because Gabriel was making her keep distance and trying to protect his son.

Late gratitude is late.

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2009-09-29 03:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for reading!

[identity profile] sevendais.livejournal.com 2008-12-20 09:34 am (UTC)(link)
dude, i love it, and when it's not 4:30 AM i'll be a little more specific, but yeah. amazing. elle's a freaking gun, and you shouldn't keep her in the house.

AH. it's genius.

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2009-09-29 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for reading, and don't worry about 4:30 am. It's a bitch - either too late or too early. Never quite right. :P

[identity profile] di-elle.livejournal.com 2008-12-20 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
oh the last line! heartbreaking.

Late gratitude is late.

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2009-09-29 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] princessbella24.livejournal.com 2008-12-21 01:42 am (UTC)(link)
Great ficlet, especially the ending, very powerful. Your fics are awesome, keep `em coming.

Late gratitude is late.

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2009-09-29 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for reading!
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[identity profile] midasu.livejournal.com 2008-12-21 07:41 am (UTC)(link)
I've read a few Elle raises Noah and keeps him away from his crazy murdering daddy but not any Gabriel raises him and keeps him safe from the crazy that is his mommy. Great ficlet.

Late gratitude is late.

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2009-09-29 03:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] bambiscott.livejournal.com 2010-01-21 06:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw so cute. I love how that you made Elle the bad guy and not just her dead as a lot of fics do. Great job!

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2010-01-21 06:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for reading!