ext_151492 ([identity profile] jncar.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cruiscin_lan 2008-12-19 06:15 pm (UTC)

What a fun little fic!

I can totally see Gabriel putting a lot of focus on "rules" more for his own sake than for Noah's. Gabriel is the kind of man who needs a lot of discipline in his life. Which is why your depiction of his relationship with Elle is both so sad and so true.

I love your last line. :)

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