Gotta be honest, can't handle Quinn. But I saw that you'd written it and just had to read it. I know that Finn is like the world's biggest moron but with being a part of celebacy club and having a single mother you'd think he'd be all up on protected sex and not making an idiot "teenage dad" out of himself. *sigh*

It was really well executed. You turned sex for Quinn into something dirty and ugly when it should have been beautiful and awkward (if she'd really loved him).

"I love you too," she says back, but she isn't into it the way he is.
That is pretty much the story of their relationship. Finn has always felt more for her than she has for him (because she thinks he's an idiot and she doesn't trust him, and a myriad of other things). It's just absolutely heart breaking (and real) to think of her doing this to him. Scheming to ruin his life like this because she made a mistake.

Great work!