Yes, I was compelled. I got into the rhythm of the clickage, haha.
OMGOSH. So cute. I love the idea that these two come up with a semblance of a family out of their tragedies. Second person is perfect for Quinn. I feels a little too 'dear diary', and 'you' makes me think she's spent a lifetime telling herself how to feel "You feel this/ You should feel that." I don't know why I felt like a grammar ramble was appropriate, but apparently I did and here we are. WOW. She was so vulnerable in this, but not pathetic, and that's such an interesting tone to balance on. YAY. Loved it? XD
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OMGOSH. So cute. I love the idea that these two come up with a semblance of a family out of their tragedies.
Second person is perfect for Quinn. I feels a little too 'dear diary', and 'you' makes me think she's spent a lifetime telling herself how to feel "You feel this/ You should feel that." I don't know why I felt like a grammar ramble was appropriate, but apparently I did and here we are. WOW. She was so vulnerable in this, but not pathetic, and that's such an interesting tone to balance on.
YAY. Loved it? XD