Lovely, lovely. You know, second person POV normally makes me stab my back button as soon as I see the first "you." It's almost always the prelude to a hot goddamn mess. I say "almost" because you just totally rocked it.

I have someone in my life who's way more like a father figure to me than my own dad is, and the delicacy and sweetness of the bond between Quinn and Will was really well done.