great writing.
It would be giving up, a show of weakness, the easy way out - and Quinn Fabray, in spite of everything, could not admit defeat. If she was going down, then she was going down swinging.
- this is so Quinn.
and I loved your characterisation of the others too- Puck wanting to make things right with Quinn, to raise his baby, Rachel not realising how he felt, and Will being sort of clueless. and poor Finn, he's not the brightest, but he is good-natured.