ext_28531 ([identity profile] kathrynthegr8.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cruiscin_lan 2009-06-21 01:59 pm (UTC)

OMG! This was adorable! (Why haven't I read this before?) I loved that Mohinder is the science geek struggling to talk to a pretty girl. It always seems in fanfic he's so smooth and suave and this was so refreshing to see him be all tongue-tied and desperate. I loved the comparisons you made between Bob and Elle! That was a stroke of genius and not something I ever paid attention to before.

I really enjoyed this! Equal parts hot and sweet and all around perfect.

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