I really want to hug you, you have no idea. I LOVE Mohelle in the lab fics. It's a subsection of the already small repertoire of Mohelle, but I'm completely obsessed with it, and here you did it so beautifully. Two Mohelle fics from you! *loves*
He wondered if perhaps she would leave him alone if he ignored her (she wouldn't). He wondered if by responding to her inane questions, he was encouraging her (he was). He wondered if there was any way to make her shut up just long enough for him to figure out what the next move was supposed to be (there was one...). This is so fabulous. I LOVE humorous parenthetical asides done like this. It's rare, because the story has to be written with a certain tone in order to do it... LOVE IT. "there was one..." LOL!
"That was bad," he remarked. Elle huffed, resentful. "What was bad? The making out?" "No, I meant the... the clumsiness." Mohinder blushed. "Actually, the making out was quite enjoyable." DEATH BY SQUEE. Please, never stop writing Mohelle. Ever. That bit of dialogue made me happier than you can possibly imagine. I love all the clumsiness and their mutual injuries. But then they got over it and really made out on the floor (I love a good makeout session on the floor!!!) This is going in my memories and on my rec list. It's everything I've ever wanted.
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He wondered if perhaps she would leave him alone if he ignored her (she wouldn't). He wondered if by responding to her inane questions, he was encouraging her (he was). He wondered if there was any way to make her shut up just long enough for him to figure out what the next move was supposed to be (there was one...).
This is so fabulous. I LOVE humorous parenthetical asides done like this. It's rare, because the story has to be written with a certain tone in order to do it... LOVE IT. "there was one..." LOL!
"That was bad," he remarked.
Elle huffed, resentful. "What was bad? The making out?"
"No, I meant the... the clumsiness." Mohinder blushed. "Actually, the making out was quite enjoyable."
DEATH BY SQUEE. Please, never stop writing Mohelle. Ever. That bit of dialogue made me happier than you can possibly imagine. I love all the clumsiness and their mutual injuries. But then they got over it and really made out on the floor (I love a good makeout session on the floor!!!) This is going in my memories and on my rec list. It's everything I've ever wanted.