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cruiscin_lan ([personal profile] cruiscin_lan) wrote2009-04-26 10:09 pm

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Okay, geez, I've been a little post-happy today but I'm so lame I make myself laugh.

Firstly, no slash today. To quote [livejournal.com profile] weirdofromafar, this is Heroes fandom, right?

Secondly, I'm not even kidding - I just spent twenty minutes trying to read this fic and I am so stuck on the first line. I think I might be obsessed with Mohinder taking showers. Now I realize that I think I've written him either getting in or getting out of the shower at least twice, and here he is in the shower, and... what the hell. I'm never getting past this first sentence. Someone let me know what happens, 'k? Thanks.

[identity profile] yetanothermask.livejournal.com 2009-04-27 02:54 am (UTC)(link)
Let's see:
- Elle steps into the shower with Mohinder
- Elle washes her hair
- Elle washes Mohinder's hair
- Elle gives Mohinder a blowjob
- Elle pulls away and complains that he tastes like soap (he was getting ready to jack himself off before she showed up)
- Elle finishes it (I think, sort of zoned out in this part)
- They're both late for work.

Also, I fail at grammar.

ETA: Crap, I just realized the author is on your flist and can probably see this. *goes to hide under a rock somewhere*
Edited 2009-04-27 02:58 (UTC)

[identity profile] cruiscin-lan.livejournal.com 2009-04-27 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
See, even in this succinct summary, all I can see is shower with Mohinder and now I feel compelled to take a shower myself.