Total lamers are my favorite kind of people! I like to respond to my feedback late, so there you go.

I'm glad the story seemed original to you. I think because I've never really written Mylar before I didn't write myself into corners - I have no corners to write myself into (yet). And I'm glad it didn't totally depress you... :P

And again, aurilly was totally my dialogue coach, so pat her on the back a little next time you see her.