oh dear god. i just narrowly escaped choking on a chocolate easter egg. here are the reasons: -(from the chai, not the syringe) -momo lives in his lab -just the whole elle/sylar everything, and by the way, which one of them is the rock and which one is the hard place? -i like when people are taken aback.
okay, i'm taking your word for it that you want me to tell you if i see errors (and keeping in mind the whole commenting discussion), and i saw a couple of things...
*"This is a formula I came up. If..." --i think you need a "with" in there. *and an end quote after: "They all died before I could determine whether it did or not.
LB:TT FTW. totally worth having to heimlich myself.
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-(from the chai, not the syringe)
-momo lives in his lab
-just the whole elle/sylar everything, and by the way, which one of them is the rock and which one is the hard place?
-i like when people are taken aback.
okay, i'm taking your word for it that you want me to tell you if i see errors (and keeping in mind the whole commenting discussion), and i saw a couple of things...
*"This is a formula I came up. If..." --i think you need a "with" in there.
*and an end quote after: "They all died before I could determine whether it did or not.
LB:TT FTW. totally worth having to heimlich myself.