A damn fine first mylar, dear.This part: suddenly an image of Mohinder's face appeared in Sylar's mind. In a flash of his imagination, Sylar could see Mohinder doing something unnatural, unfathomable, unthinkable - so bad it that it was was oh, so, so, so good. This is win. Only the slight error of 'so bad it that it was was', or was it actually there to further emphasize how dreaming of Mohinder puts him off-center?
In any case, this was good. I hope to see more from you.
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In any case, this was good. I hope to see more from you.
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