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ext_139217 ([identity profile] midasu.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cruiscin_lan 2008-12-13 08:04 am (UTC)

I like that you have Elle planning on going back. I think that you really get what Elle's reactions would be. First she panics and runs to her Dad and the company and then she thinks for a moment and figures out how she can go back to where she wants to be...but she hadn't really figured out all the consequences, like Gabriel's reaction.

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