ext_86866 ([identity profile] fuzzy-paint.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cruiscin_lan 2010-03-19 04:19 am (UTC)

So, this hurt. A LOT.

I love the contrast between the beginning and the ending parts. He's still trying to help her out/still being a decent guy, even if he is pissed. He's letting her stay there, at least until she has a different place to stay there.

And then, oh damn, and then.

You have such a way with words. Sigh.

(also, I love how Mrs. H is worrying over the whereabouts of her son. shining moment of - I don't want to say happiness, so maybe ...? IDK - in this very dark and unhappy fic)

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