ext_50489 ([identity profile] becca-radcgg.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cruiscin_lan 2010-03-19 03:53 am (UTC)

Dude! What have you done to my Finn?!?!?!??!

It kills that he's so destroyed that he'd do that to her then realize how empty it is anyway. Intimacy can't be faked. *sigh*

His breath feels warm and wet and it makes the small hairs on the back of her neck stand up.

I love this line. It's so beautifully descriptive, an ominous foreshadow of the things to come.

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