ext_61671 ([identity profile] bellonablack.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cruiscin_lan 2010-03-18 07:54 am (UTC)

This story. IS. RACHEL. BERRY.

IN THE FLESH (or not but you know what I mean)

Her vulnerability and then that side of her which is completely self-absorbed (delusional)...but this is a defense mechanism. I think.

But most of all, I like that you got everything about her character in this one-shot. Like all her aspects. And then Puck's too. He was kind of 'mean' teasing and then he felt bad. <3

Good. Job. on this. :-) (gold star?)

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