I have thoughts, B! Deep, deep thoughts... of like thoughtfulness or something.
I shoulda bought you for help_haiti! DAMN! IF only I'd known then what I know now. I could have made you write the most mundane scenario and it would have turned out beautifully (because I'm evil and that's how I roll).
I loved how you took first moments and made them into something more. How you made the kisses and the sex about Finn (when it probably wasn't ENTIRELY about him). And can we talk about the sex for a minute? Rachel feels like she's losing Finn so she fucks somebody else, BRILLIANT! (and totally the kind of logic I was going to use, but might not now, thank you very much.) I love how they do that thing at grad that everyone does. Sometimes they do stay in touch over the summer but after that... I barely speak to anyone from high school now... so I'm well versed in that.
I love the way you write (it should be glaringly obvious). The ability you have to get into anyone's head and make it your home leaves me in awe.
The snippits work wonderfully, too. Giving the reader just enough detail to feel the scene without spelling everything out verbatim.
I found this one (sorry to say) through unequivocally's PR rec page. I'm so glad she put it up there! :)
(on a somewhat related note, I'm totally using this in my feedback thingy and I'm now down to FOUR FICS! My prize better be freaking amazing... like the most amazing pf fic EVAH! *huggles you*)
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I shoulda bought you for help_haiti! DAMN! IF only I'd known then what I know now. I could have made you write the most mundane scenario and it would have turned out beautifully (because I'm evil and that's how I roll).
I loved how you took first moments and made them into something more. How you made the kisses and the sex about Finn (when it probably wasn't ENTIRELY about him). And can we talk about the sex for a minute? Rachel feels like she's losing Finn so she fucks somebody else, BRILLIANT! (and totally the kind of logic I was going to use, but might not now, thank you very much.) I love how they do that thing at grad that everyone does. Sometimes they do stay in touch over the summer but after that... I barely speak to anyone from high school now... so I'm well versed in that.
I love the way you write (it should be glaringly obvious). The ability you have to get into anyone's head and make it your home leaves me in awe.
The snippits work wonderfully, too. Giving the reader just enough detail to feel the scene without spelling everything out verbatim.
I found this one (sorry to say) through
(on a somewhat related note, I'm totally using this in my feedback thingy and I'm now down to FOUR FICS! My prize better be freaking amazing... like the most amazing pf fic EVAH! *huggles you*)