http://whitelilly0989.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] whitelilly0989.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cruiscin_lan 2010-01-29 01:07 am (UTC)

I'm thinking that you're an amazing writer. You write with some sort of realistic style... that's beyond words.

I'm glad you wrote this, and I love how you made all their "firsts" sort of wrong/right... like with the dancing, there were moments when they were in sync... I love how you did that... and Ironically, how you made their "last" be their beginnning. That was very clever.

Loved this!
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