I particularly loved the section where Rachel thinks back on Finn's abandonment, because that has been quite the sticking point with me on the show.
He's such a good guy in so many ways, but at the same time he acts without thinking through the consequences (like quitting Glee for football, or revealing Quinn's pregnancy to her parents). Probably not the best guy to date until he grows up a little bit.

I'm glad you liked it! It was a great prompt. :)