Dude, that was excellent. It was exquisitely funny-hot-sad, which is my personal holy trifecta for P/R stories - and you nailed it in slightly more than 1,000 words. Your Puck voice is very strong. And the format really was great.
I was going through keeping track of things I wanted to point out that I fucking loved, but I'll settle for one example of each:
Funny - "...half a virgin..." (I'd say LOL!WHICH HALF. Except I read the story, duh.)
Hot - Aborted!sex. I think I'm making that my personal kink for this ship.
Sad - A lot, but the line about the babies his daughter's age. Poor Puck.
Prediction: cruiscin_lan will continue to write badass Glee fic.
Experiment: Go buy her at help_haiti; give prompt "Ken Tanaka / Howard Bamboo - disco inferno"
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Dude, that was excellent. It was exquisitely funny-hot-sad, which is my personal holy trifecta for P/R stories - and you nailed it in slightly more than 1,000 words. Your Puck voice is very strong. And the format really was great.
I was going through keeping track of things I wanted to point out that I fucking loved, but I'll settle for one example of each:
Funny - "...half a virgin..." (I'd say LOL!WHICH HALF. Except I read the story, duh.)
Hot - Aborted!sex. I think I'm making that my personal kink for this ship.
Sad - A lot, but the line about the babies his daughter's age. Poor Puck.
Prediction:
Experiment: Go buy her at