You captured Finn's voice so well that I could actually see it play out in my head as I was reading. Finn sitting in front of Emma and just babbling on about all this stuff. Especially this part:
It's so weird because sometimes she'll be like "Oh my god I really need a burger right now, like I need a burger" so I get her a burger and she scarfs it down and then like ten minutes later she pukes it up anyway. She obviously didn't need the burger if that's what she's gonna do with it, you know?
That's - that's a pregnancy thing? Oh. I kinda thought maybe she was allergic to ketchup, or something, but that makes sense, too.
I also love the inclusion of all those pamphlets and I could only imagine the titles that were on them.
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You captured Finn's voice so well that I could actually see it play out in my head as I was reading. Finn sitting in front of Emma and just babbling on about all this stuff. Especially this part:
It's so weird because sometimes she'll be like "Oh my god I really need a burger right now, like I need a burger" so I get her a burger and she scarfs it down and then like ten minutes later she pukes it up anyway. She obviously didn't need the burger if that's what she's gonna do with it, you know?
That's - that's a pregnancy thing? Oh. I kinda thought maybe she was allergic to ketchup, or something, but that makes sense, too.
I also love the inclusion of all those pamphlets and I could only imagine the titles that were on them.
Such a great fic. :D