YOUR STYLE IS WEIRD AND YOU NEED LESS SENTENCES FRAGMENTS because I like using sentence fragments in some things in regards to tone, character, length, etc.

OMG! I get that as well. It's frustrating.

I love it when a beta is picky but it makes me go WTF when they change something correct into something wrong. It was one of those grammar things that get confused all the time so I spent five minutes googling it and asking people and turns out I had it right to begin with. *facepalm*

I sometimes beta and I have writers disappear on me. I'll send them an edited copy of the story and they won't reply back to say they received it. And they don't end up posting the story. maybe, I'm just too critical!